Score: 8

"Animation Carrys The Flash(My opinion)"

submission: the Last of the Dashkin

date: December 10, 2009

Its interesting you have a narrator this time and there seems to be an actual plot forming. Like before the animation is quite well done and problably the strongest point of this flash. The music wasn't too bad either. Besides that, there's not much else to say.

Score: 7

"Not bad of a start....."

submission: LARRY episode 1

date: November 20, 2009

That was pretty good for a first episode. I've never really seen much humor in your works so this is different for me.

The graphics wasn't too bad and the characters were all drawn very well. You have a cool style. The sound effects weren't really balanced to me. There were too many times when the voices were a little low and I had to higher the volume. And, when i did that, the voices got too loud. I never had a problem with the voice acting though. It seems like you voiced a lot yourself and I'd say you did a great job. The humor wasn't bad but the delivery needs work. Its the kind of humor that your thinking thats pretty funny but you don't laugh. I liked the part when Larry got hit by the door and as you heard many times i found the father part pretty disturbing.

In summation, this is a good start but just work on your delivery! I look forward to see where this leads.
Final Rating: 7 Final Vote: 3

Score: 10

"Awesome"

submission: Madness Combat 5.5

date: November 19, 2009

This is some really great stuff. It was a cool idea to see two protaganists team up for a change. I liked how you went back to start to tell well the two came from. It didn't tell too much but it looks you'll make more with these protagonists before you end the series.

The action like always is creative, brutal, and versitile. Your always coming up with something fancy. Mad props. It also seems like you're only getting better. Both of the protagonist's were cool and as they slowly got their "accessories" you they showed lots of personality. The small nabs of humor placed were appriciated. All the fights were above average but the best part is when you turned off the music and then it went into an all out epic brawl. The sound quality and graphics were good like always and it was interesting to see the Tricky again.

In summation I enjoyed this flash a lot. I would pick this over Aggregation anyday. It kind of ended ubruptly, but I know I can expect more goodness soon. Keep doing what you do, but would it kill you to just make the story clear for once? :)

Score: 8

"Interesting"

submission: The Last Degree

date: November 14, 2009

Interesting animation. The drawings and backrounds themselves were well made. The soundtrack was also really good. On the down side the audio was off at a certain part but I'm sure you could fix that later or at least learn from it. I wanna see were this goes because it keeps you wanting more. Until then I won't make a final opinion on this (series?)

Score: 8

"Not bad"

submission: Foamy: Squirrel SOngs

date: November 5, 2009

Not bad singing, lol. Some of the songs were sort of catchy. I loved the comments in between. Do you think Foamy will ever find peace and happiness? :)

Score: 10

"Great ending to great series"

submission: Jerry: The End

date: November 2, 2009

That was a great ending to funny complete Jerry's timeline. I feel so bad for Jerry. His life is and was so messed up because of the mistakes of his father.

The animation/graphics were crystal clear like always. Your drawing style is cool and unique. The voices were all pretty professional and isn't this the first time Jerry spoke?

As for the content itself, it was very heartfelt. Usually, I get some laughs from this series even though I know the backround of the story is pretty serious. This one seems to focus on all seriousness and I don't mind. It's a shame that Jerry had to grow through all that pain. I mean how are you supposed to feel when your *fill in a bad word* father accuses you of killing your mother? That's just terrible, growing up with that. Sadly thats the story for hundreds(probably thousands ) of kids.

Your characters are all full of life with their own original personalities. You have Jerry: The tragic victim of two peoples choices, Mom: A women who you could feel compassion for, just made some bad mistakes like most people, then you have the Dad: The bum/scum who you'd love to see get shot or something. The werid thing is, dispite my negative(although he's funny in this series) feelings towards the character you made me feel some slight compassion for his character when he revealed those things to Jerry in the car. (I'm leaving out Jackie.)

Overall, everything here was done very well. I appriciate your hard work on this series. By the way, sorry for the deep analizing of this series because I'm not sure if you really wanted it to be that deep. It was cool to have a nice ending for once. Good luck on yout future works.

P.S. (I though Jerry went to hell? Whats up with the angel thing after the credits?)

Score: 6

"You killed it"

submission: Versus The Halloween

date: October 31, 2009

I agree withe the two reviews below me. The animation wasn't the best but the action was pretty fluid and dynamic. The music was epic. And it was getting really cool until the gay ending killed the mood. I'm really getting tired of the infinite gay jokes on this site....

Score: 8

"Progessively Weird but doesn't = bad."

submission: -Last Resort-

date: October 31, 2009

Well, I'm never staying in a motel or going in a public stall again :) By the way, I hate public stalls when I have to take a number two, and only use them when I absolutely have to.

The animation style was...different. But, it fits the whole bizzare, strange, weird, creepy(pick a word :)) atmosphere you've created. The whole thing kinda freaked me out but never scared me. The freakiest for me was that monster that constantly threw up. What was your goal for this flash by the way? Was it supposed to scare, humor, etc?

Not a bad flash for what it was but I just didn't grasp it that well as I could have. It kept getting weirder as time passed. But, I give you props because its really original. And didn't the guy like die, three times, lol? In summation it was a good flash but you have to appriciate it for what it is to get the most out of it.

Final Rating: 7.5(rounds to 8 using NG system) Final Score/Vote: 4

P.S. (Ur inspiration on making this seems very interesting. I'd really like to hear about ur creepy "night of stalls" in Korea . PM me about it if you ever get the chance!)

Score: 8

"Decent animation but falls into cliche traps"

submission: The Devil of New Haven

date: October 31, 2009

Not bad. Animation was good; The character designs were well made; The voices seemed professional enough. I liked the story. Not the most original but still interesting.

Like usual horror storys the foolishness and curiosity of people proves to be their down fall. This movie also has the annoying cliches of horrors like tripping over a rock and staying there to get killed. If i was being chased by a freaky, devil scarecrow and tripped over a rock, I'd probably without thinking roll over and run the fastest i've ever ran in my life.

The ending was typical but I can't blame you. It's not as easy as people think to be original. one question: Was the granpa the boy in the story looking at the scarecrow farmer with a scared expression? Overall, I can tell you worked hard on this and it was a pretty decent animation. I liked the part when the scarcrow first talked the best. That aside, this fell into the usual cliche traps of horrors. It also seemed like the ending came and went all to fast. Not bad of a job though.

Score: 10

"Simple, Plesant, Overall Nice Flash"

submission: Digory

date: October 31, 2009

I liked that. It was cool seeing a more light hearted halloween submition opposed to the scary/humorous ones. I loved the animation style. The drawings were all superb. The music was just perfect. I feel this animation was different because it gives you an opposite feeling then most halloween stuff brings. Don't mean to sound sappy, but it kinda made me feel warm inside. Is Digory the name of the pumpkin headed fellow? And also, are you making a just for christmas submission this year? If you are I'd love to see it. Well done.